Have you ever gone swimming
In a doubtful sea?
Thick and dark like an inkpot...
Every hope stained
With a deep, cavernous hue
Every smile dimmed
By a voice unechoed
And so many chances not taken
For fear of drowning
Do you not feel the same;
Or will you rescue me?
2 comments:
I like this, but i feel like "cavernous" is opposed to the "unechoed" voices... am i just missing the link?
not really... cavernous and unechoed are relating to two different subjects
The link is that they're part of the same chord... kinda like when in choir two sections are singing two notes that should clash but somehow make it work. It's done alot in barbershop.
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