I thought about writing tonight,
But haven't got the heart
Waiting on the pale sunlight
Another day to start.
Fighting sleep and dreams
I'll write anyway
My brain with nothing teems
Tired fingers delay.
Forgive these sleepy lines
Better some than none
More in daylight times
For now I'm done.
3 comments:
of course always better some than none! yay! :D lol. I think you should fix the meter though so that it is regular throughout; you wouldnt loose the on the spur of the moment effect and it would facilitate its lightheartedness... unless you were going for something else lol!
lol... i was so exhausted. And standing watch on Easter weekend in the middle of the night! I think the irregular meter shows that fatigue well...
Well then, by all means, keep it! :D
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